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All in all a good story. But there are some ambiguities:
The attack on the ship was more like a hooligan trick, and how the Triads boarded the ship was not shown;
The bus is too fragile to blow up;
The bandits from the Reef stand still and do not try to attack, they can be easily removed from the sniper rifle.
But I still put a plus for the story, especially for the ending.
The attack on the ship was more like a hooligan trick, and how the Triads boarded the ship was not shown;
The bus is too fragile to blow up;
The bandits from the Reef stand still and do not try to attack, they can be easily removed from the sniper rifle.
But I still put a plus for the story, especially for the ending.
If it is being developed, it will be the best version of DYOM, after which it will be possible not to create new versions. After all, more than three years have passed.
BraBus.001 on 12.04.2017, 21:06:35