There are a lot of mistakes in the mission, as Vanya himself noted below. There is one more. Why does that organization have as many as 3 secret bases? And 2 of them are in San Fierro. Are they so rich? But if you remember that the author is the first project. Then you can close your eyes to all the flaws. I believe that although the events in the mission happen very quickly, the plot is still interesting to watch.
Fifth mistake: I really liked the ventilation part. But what kind of "unbearable pain"? Did his fixes kick him there or what? From that fall, he could not get such an injury.
He was injured from a fall from ventilation. Who knows what he could hit? Maybe he landed on a needle that pierced him with some important organ?
For the idea and plot +, well done. The problem is implementation. The lack of punctuation marks in places where it is necessary, some errors in the text and, in my opinion, slightly incorrect dialogs ... I’ll put a plus.
So sir. What do we have here? The mission is quite interesting, but it also has its drawbacks, now I will explain everything. PROS: The plot The plot is very good and interesting. There is intrigue and interest in the characters. Shots Divine shots, as if I really watch a movie. Speaking of films ... CONS: Fatigue As many as 8 missions and they all consist of cutscenes. After viewing chapter 4, you already begin to get very tired of inaction. Pointless mission One of the chapters is completely meaningless (SPOILER) The mission where Aaron has glitches happens, it does not affect the plot in any way, and in my opinion it’s just added. TOTAL That's all. The mission is pretty good, I recommend it to everyone.
Well, something like that is not very, some garbage. Nothing is clear. Characters finally can not be revealed, and in the mission itself, finally, some kind of kapets. I do not advise in short.
He was injured from a fall from ventilation. Who knows what he could hit? Maybe he landed on a needle that pierced him with some important organ?
I guess I'm stupid?
What are the green ovals? THERE ARE NO GREEN OVALS THERE, I have not seen.
The mission is quite interesting, but it also has its drawbacks, now I will explain everything.
PROS:
The plot
The plot is very good and interesting. There is intrigue and interest in the characters.
Shots
Divine shots, as if I really watch a movie. Speaking of films ...
CONS:
Fatigue
As many as 8 missions and they all consist of cutscenes. After viewing chapter 4, you already begin to get very tired of inaction.
Pointless mission
One of the chapters is completely meaningless (SPOILER)
The mission where Aaron has glitches happens, it does not affect the plot in any way, and in my opinion it’s just added.
TOTAL
That's all. The mission is pretty good, I recommend it to everyone.
In the cafe after the murder of Josh should be the completion of the mission. This is just a bug.
Gasus 12/05/2017, 17:15:48
Mistakes were probably made on purpose.
CowBoy69 11.29.2017, 05:08:28