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Cool movie, right now check out the mission.
UPD
Wow, the brackets in the text are enraging me. Gentlemen, you can use brackets in your Pasha’s correspondence, but not in DYOM, please remember.
And yes lol, The Guys From The Streets? Phah, Boys N Da Hood, didn’t want to?
Masak0vske 07/03/2018, 23:40:53
UPD
Wow, the brackets in the text are enraging me. Gentlemen, you can use brackets in your Pasha’s correspondence, but not in DYOM, please remember.
And yes lol, The Guys From The Streets? Phah, Boys N Da Hood, didn’t want to?
Masak0vske 07/03/2018, 23:40:53
Just a gorgeous mission, held with an open mouth to the author -respect. This atmosphere of dystopia simply made me forget about my pressing problems. Unfortunately, and maybe fortunately, I did not load the soundtrack from Mad Max, but there was a soundtrack with K-DST radio, and it seems to me that for dystopia this radio fits perfectly. Arrangement of objects, shooting at your car, variety and accuracy of transport - from Freeway to Roadtrain. Chic mission, one of the best, an example for the rest.
Interestingly, someone did not understand that the "grove giving" was filmed for the purpose of rofla? The entire video is clear that the author explicitly turned on the flush mode.
I found something else.
1. The game implies that the Families gang has three parts: Grove Street Families, Seville Boulevard Families and Temple Drive Families. But the author of the missions felt that Temple = Grove Street. It’s wrong to make mistakes, it’s a very stupid mistake. Temple Drive = Families, Families, whatever, but not Grove.
2. At the time of the meeting, Charlie and Deuce had three people: Charlie, Deuce, and Neil (l) a. Deuce's car, as far as I know, Euros. Euros is a two-seater. The question is how did they get Charlie to the area? Here, either Neela had to stay in the alley and get under her own power, or Deuce had to give the car to Charlie or Neela so that they would go to the area. Rave.
3. During the Rat mission, in Part II, Charlie says that he takes a picture of DeKing with the Ballas. BUT HE DOESN'T DO IT! AND HAD TO NOT TELL ELGEJA ABOUT DECING, FOR HE WASN'T PHOTOGRAPHED! THIS IS JUST A STORY HOLE! Why then go after DeKing if you are not making any dock-in-meeting?
4. Niggas say "tk," author, are you really lazy to write like that? This is the first. Literally.
Masak0vske 06/25/2018, 13:49:13
1. The game implies that the Families gang has three parts: Grove Street Families, Seville Boulevard Families and Temple Drive Families. But the author of the missions felt that Temple = Grove Street. It’s wrong to make mistakes, it’s a very stupid mistake. Temple Drive = Families, Families, whatever, but not Grove.
2. At the time of the meeting, Charlie and Deuce had three people: Charlie, Deuce, and Neil (l) a. Deuce's car, as far as I know, Euros. Euros is a two-seater. The question is how did they get Charlie to the area? Here, either Neela had to stay in the alley and get under her own power, or Deuce had to give the car to Charlie or Neela so that they would go to the area. Rave.
3. During the Rat mission, in Part II, Charlie says that he takes a picture of DeKing with the Ballas. BUT HE DOESN'T DO IT! AND HAD TO NOT TELL ELGEJA ABOUT DECING, FOR HE WASN'T PHOTOGRAPHED! THIS IS JUST A STORY HOLE! Why then go after DeKing if you are not making any dock-in-meeting?
4. Niggas say "tk," author, are you really lazy to write like that? This is the first. Literally.
Masak0vske 06/25/2018, 13:49:13
I found something else.
1. The game implies that the Families gang has three parts: Grove Street Families, Seville Boulevard Families and Temple Drive Families. But the author of the missions felt that Temple = Grove Street. It’s wrong to make mistakes, it’s a very stupid mistake. Temple Drive = Families, Families, whatever, but not Grove.
2. At the time of the meeting, Charlie and Deuce had three people: Charlie, Deuce, and Neil (l) a. Deuce's car, as far as I know, Euros. Euros is a two-seater. The question is how did they get Charlie to the area? Here, either Neela had to stay in the alley and get under her own power, or Deuce had to give the car to Charlie or Neela so that they would go to the area. Rave.
3. During the Rat mission, in Part II, Charlie says that he takes a picture of DeKing with the Ballas. BUT HE DOESN'T DO IT! AND HAD TO NOT TELL ELGEJA ABOUT DECING, FOR HE WASN'T PHOTOGRAPHED! THIS IS JUST A STORY HOLE! Why then go after DeKing if you are not making any dock-in-meeting?
4. Niggas say "tk," author, are you really lazy to write like that? This is the first. Literally.
Masak0vske 06/25/2018, 13:49:13
1. The game implies that the Families gang has three parts: Grove Street Families, Seville Boulevard Families and Temple Drive Families. But the author of the missions felt that Temple = Grove Street. It’s wrong to make mistakes, it’s a very stupid mistake. Temple Drive = Families, Families, whatever, but not Grove.
2. At the time of the meeting, Charlie and Deuce had three people: Charlie, Deuce, and Neil (l) a. Deuce's car, as far as I know, Euros. Euros is a two-seater. The question is how did they get Charlie to the area? Here, either Neela had to stay in the alley and get under her own power, or Deuce had to give the car to Charlie or Neela so that they would go to the area. Rave.
3. During the Rat mission, in Part II, Charlie says that he takes a picture of DeKing with the Ballas. BUT HE DOESN'T DO IT! AND HAD TO NOT TELL ELGEJA ABOUT DECING, FOR HE WASN'T PHOTOGRAPHED! THIS IS JUST A STORY HOLE! Why then go after DeKing if you are not making any dock-in-meeting?
4. Niggas say "tk," author, are you really lazy to write like that? This is the first. Literally.
Masak0vske 06/25/2018, 13:49:13
I found something else.
1. The game implies that the Families gang has three parts: Grove Street Families, Seville Boulevard Families and Temple Drive Families. But the author of the missions felt that Temple = Grove Street. It’s wrong to make mistakes, it’s a very stupid mistake. Temple Drive = Families, Families, whatever, but not Grove.
2. At the time of the meeting, Charlie and Deuce had three people: Charlie, Deuce, and Neil (l) a. Deuce's car, as far as I know, Euros. Euros is a two-seater. The question is how did they get Charlie to the area? Here, either Neela had to stay in the alley and get under her own power, or Deuce had to give the car to Charlie or Neela so that they would go to the area. Rave.
3. During the Rat mission, in Part II, Charlie says that he takes a picture of DeKing with the Ballas. BUT HE DOESN'T DO IT! AND HAD TO NOT TELL ELGEJA ABOUT DECING, FOR HE WASN'T PHOTOGRAPHED! THIS IS JUST A STORY HOLE! Why then go after DeKing if you are not making any dock-in-meeting?
4. Niggas say "tk," author, are you really lazy to write like that? This is the first. Literally.
Masak0vske 06/25/2018, 13:49:13
1. The game implies that the Families gang has three parts: Grove Street Families, Seville Boulevard Families and Temple Drive Families. But the author of the missions felt that Temple = Grove Street. It’s wrong to make mistakes, it’s a very stupid mistake. Temple Drive = Families, Families, whatever, but not Grove.
2. At the time of the meeting, Charlie and Deuce had three people: Charlie, Deuce, and Neil (l) a. Deuce's car, as far as I know, Euros. Euros is a two-seater. The question is how did they get Charlie to the area? Here, either Neela had to stay in the alley and get under her own power, or Deuce had to give the car to Charlie or Neela so that they would go to the area. Rave.
3. During the Rat mission, in Part II, Charlie says that he takes a picture of DeKing with the Ballas. BUT HE DOESN'T DO IT! AND HAD TO NOT TELL ELGEJA ABOUT DECING, FOR HE WASN'T PHOTOGRAPHED! THIS IS JUST A STORY HOLE! Why then go after DeKing if you are not making any dock-in-meeting?
4. Niggas say "tk," author, are you really lazy to write like that? This is the first. Literally.
Masak0vske 06/25/2018, 13:49:13
I found something else.
1. The game implies that the Families gang has three parts: Grove Street Families, Seville Boulevard Families and Temple Drive Families. But the author of the missions felt that Temple = Grove Street. It’s wrong to make mistakes, it’s a very stupid mistake. Temple Drive = Families, Families, whatever, but not Grove.
2. At the time of the meeting, Charlie and Deuce had three people: Charlie, Deuce, and Neil (l) a. Deuce's car, as far as I know, Euros. Euros is a two-seater. The question is how did they get Charlie to the area? Here, either Neela had to stay in the alley and get under her own power, or Deuce had to give the car to Charlie or Neela so that they would go to the area. Rave.
3. During the Rat mission, in Part II, Charlie says that he takes a picture of DeKing with the Ballas. BUT HE DOESN'T DO IT! AND HAD TO NOT TELL ELGEJA ABOUT DECING, FOR HE WASN'T PHOTOGRAPHED! THIS IS JUST A STORY HOLE! Why then go after DeKing if you are not making any dock-in-meeting?
4. Niggas say "tk," author, are you really lazy to write like that? This is the first. Literally.
Masak0vske 06/25/2018, 13:49:13
1. The game implies that the Families gang has three parts: Grove Street Families, Seville Boulevard Families and Temple Drive Families. But the author of the missions felt that Temple = Grove Street. It’s wrong to make mistakes, it’s a very stupid mistake. Temple Drive = Families, Families, whatever, but not Grove.
2. At the time of the meeting, Charlie and Deuce had three people: Charlie, Deuce, and Neil (l) a. Deuce's car, as far as I know, Euros. Euros is a two-seater. The question is how did they get Charlie to the area? Here, either Neela had to stay in the alley and get under her own power, or Deuce had to give the car to Charlie or Neela so that they would go to the area. Rave.
3. During the Rat mission, in Part II, Charlie says that he takes a picture of DeKing with the Ballas. BUT HE DOESN'T DO IT! AND HAD TO NOT TELL ELGEJA ABOUT DECING, FOR HE WASN'T PHOTOGRAPHED! THIS IS JUST A STORY HOLE! Why then go after DeKing if you are not making any dock-in-meeting?
4. Niggas say "tk," author, are you really lazy to write like that? This is the first. Literally.
Masak0vske 06/25/2018, 13:49:13
Quote: nemnogo star
this is the perfect project
I do not agree with what is written. The project, although it was done with high quality, is still not close to 10/10 DYOMOTY, 12/10.
The project is made on a solid eight. Of the minuses (serious minuses, and not those that the author wrote), I can single out the following:
1. Dialogs are too sophisticated. I don’t see it at the first diomer, but if in other projects it could somehow be justified - like serious people, they have work, all that, then the ghetto, even the name says that. And what do we hear from simple untrained guys who most likely didn’t even go to college, guys? "The reason for this could be." The author, if you want to tighten up your lvl of writing Geth dialogs - go GTA GTA in English, without crack. You will see that in almost every sentence they have Man, homie, shit, and other Gett slang. 2. Niggas reading Eminem. Mmm ... Dude, if you wanted to find a suitable soundtrack, you would have taken songs from LS Radio or from Playback FM (of course, this is the East Coast, and in LS it is so-so, but it's not Eminem and is close)
3. Repeating songs. It was necessary to work on such a thing, the same mission with the leader Aztekas, when he met with GG. The whole mission is played by Snoop Dogg and Dre, here the song ends and .. again? Rilly? It was necessary to at least combine two songs into one audio file and then already pour into the diome, otherwise this is complete nonsense.
4. The skin of the Nill. Well this is a shame. It was necessary to take the original from the SA, otherwise the whole atmosphere disappears. And yes, you have two Ls in the RAR archive, and one in the name of the mission.
5. Aztecas - Mexicans. And they say Pindos. If you wanted to write 'pendejo', then these are two different things. Pendejo - Herogol.
6. Ballasts withstand more than 10 rounds of AK, the author is, well, sheer nonsense. In reality, AK carries a simple nigga with two rounds of ammunition, and here ... In short, if you wanted to add complexity, then this is not so. Sorry if you made a mistake.
7. Predictability. Example: mission Massacre in the area, the last in the I part. By the name and the first two seconds of the cutscene, I determined that this mission will be about how ballasts UNEXPECTIVELY burst on the party of Grove. MDE.
8. The color of the name of the mission - if you think it's cool - no. This attracts only shkolota. And choosing a mission is very difficult.
These are the minuses for the completed 1.5 parts, maybe I’ll dig up something else.
Of course, I will not list the pluses - they have already been listed for me. The author lacks screenwriting. Read fan fiction about the ghetto on the ficbook, watch movies about the ghetto, maybe you will find out something useful for yourself.
Mat. Warning issued, comment edited.
Kiriller12 06/24/2018, 11:51:37 p.m.
Quote: nemnogo star
this is the perfect project
I do not agree with what is written. The project, although it was done with high quality, is still not close to 10/10 DYOMOTY, 12/10.
The project is made on a solid eight. Of the minuses (serious minuses, and not those that the author wrote), I can single out the following:
1. Dialogs are too sophisticated. I don’t see it at the first diomer, but if in other projects it could somehow be justified - like serious people, they have work, all that, then the ghetto, even the name says that. And what do we hear from simple untrained guys who most likely didn’t even go to college, guys? "The reason for this could be." The author, if you want to tighten up your lvl of writing Geth dialogs - go GTA GTA in English, without crack. You will see that in almost every sentence they have Man, homie, shit, and other Gett slang. 2. Niggas reading Eminem. Mmm ... Dude, if you wanted to find a suitable soundtrack, you would have taken songs from LS Radio or from Playback FM (of course, this is the East Coast, and in LS it is so-so, but it's not Eminem and is close)
3. Repeating songs. It was necessary to work on such a thing, the same mission with the leader Aztekas, when he met with GG. The whole mission is played by Snoop Dogg and Dre, here the song ends and .. again? Rilly? It was necessary to at least combine two songs into one audio file and then already pour into the diome, otherwise this is complete nonsense.
4. The skin of the Nill. Well this is a shame. It was necessary to take the original from the SA, otherwise the whole atmosphere disappears. And yes, you have two Ls in the RAR archive, and one in the name of the mission.
5. Aztecas - Mexicans. And they say Pindos. If you wanted to write 'pendejo', then these are two different things. Pendejo - Herogol.
6. Ballasts withstand more than 10 rounds of AK, the author is, well, sheer nonsense. In reality, AK carries a simple nigga with two rounds of ammunition, and here ... In short, if you wanted to add complexity, then this is not so. Sorry if you made a mistake.
7. Predictability. Example: mission Massacre in the area, the last in the I part. By the name and the first two seconds of the cutscene, I determined that this mission will be about how ballasts UNEXPECTIVELY burst on the party of Grove. MDE.
8. The color of the name of the mission - if you think it's cool - no. This attracts only shkolota. And choosing a mission is very difficult.
These are the minuses for the completed 1.5 parts, maybe I’ll dig up something else.
Of course, I will not list the pluses - they have already been listed for me. The author lacks screenwriting. Read fan fiction about the ghetto on the ficbook, watch movies about the ghetto, maybe you will find out something useful for yourself.
Mat. Warning issued, comment edited.
Kiriller12 06/24/2018, 11:51:37 p.m.
Quote: nemnogo star
this is the perfect project
I do not agree with what is written. The project, although it was done with high quality, is still not close to 10/10 DYOMOTY, 12/10.
The project is made on a solid eight. Of the minuses (serious minuses, and not those that the author wrote), I can single out the following:
1. Dialogs are too sophisticated. I don’t see it at the first diomer, but if in other projects it could somehow be justified - like serious people, they have work, all that, then the ghetto, even the name says that. And what do we hear from simple untrained guys who most likely didn’t even go to college, guys? "The reason for this could be." The author, if you want to tighten up your lvl of writing Geth dialogs - go GTA GTA in English, without crack. You will see that in almost every sentence they have Man, homie, shit, and other Gett slang. 2. Niggas reading Eminem. Mmm ... Dude, if you wanted to find a suitable soundtrack, you would have taken songs from LS Radio or from Playback FM (of course, this is the East Coast, and in LS it is so-so, but it's not Eminem and is close)
3. Repeating songs. It was necessary to work on such a thing, the same mission with the leader Aztekas, when he met with GG. The whole mission is played by Snoop Dogg and Dre, here the song ends and .. again? Rilly? It was necessary to at least combine two songs into one audio file and then already pour into the diome, otherwise this is complete nonsense.
4. The skin of the Nill. Well this is a shame. It was necessary to take the original from the SA, otherwise the whole atmosphere disappears. And yes, you have two Ls in the RAR archive, and one in the name of the mission.
5. Aztecas - Mexicans. And they say Pindos. If you wanted to write 'pendejo', then these are two different things. Pendejo - Herogol.
6. Ballasts withstand more than 10 rounds of AK, the author is, well, sheer nonsense. In reality, AK carries a simple nigga with two rounds of ammunition, and here ... In short, if you wanted to add complexity, then this is not so. Sorry if you made a mistake.
7. Predictability. Example: mission Massacre in the area, the last in the I part. By the name and the first two seconds of the cutscene, I determined that this mission will be about how ballasts UNEXPECTIVELY burst on the party of Grove. MDE.
8. The color of the name of the mission - if you think it's cool - no. This attracts only shkolota. And choosing a mission is very difficult.
These are the minuses for the completed 1.5 parts, maybe I’ll dig up something else.
Of course, I will not list the pluses - they have already been listed for me. The author lacks screenwriting. Read fan fiction about the ghetto on the ficbook, watch movies about the ghetto, maybe you will find out something useful for yourself.
Mat. Warning issued, comment edited.
Kiriller12 06/24/2018, 11:51:37 p.m.
Quote: nemnogo star
this is the perfect project
I do not agree with what is written. The project, although it was done with high quality, is still not close to 10/10 DYOMOTY, 12/10.
The project is made on a solid eight. Of the minuses (serious minuses, and not those that the author wrote), I can single out the following:
1. Dialogs are too sophisticated. I don’t see it at the first diomer, but if in other projects it could somehow be justified - like serious people, they have work, all that, then the ghetto, even the name says that. And what do we hear from simple untrained guys who most likely didn’t even go to college, guys? "The reason for this could be." The author, if you want to tighten up your lvl of writing Geth dialogs - go GTA GTA in English, without crack. You will see that in almost every sentence they have Man, homie, shit, and other Gett slang. 2. Niggas reading Eminem. Mmm ... Dude, if you wanted to find a suitable soundtrack, you would have taken songs from LS Radio or from Playback FM (of course, this is the East Coast, and in LS it is so-so, but it's not Eminem and is close)
3. Repeating songs. It was necessary to work on such a thing, the same mission with the leader Aztekas, when he met with GG. The whole mission is played by Snoop Dogg and Dre, here the song ends and .. again? Rilly? It was necessary to at least combine two songs into one audio file and then already pour into the diome, otherwise this is complete nonsense.
4. The skin of the Nill. Well this is a shame. It was necessary to take the original from the SA, otherwise the whole atmosphere disappears. And yes, you have two Ls in the RAR archive, and one in the name of the mission.
5. Aztecas - Mexicans. And they say Pindos. If you wanted to write 'pendejo', then these are two different things. Pendejo - Herogol.
6. Ballasts withstand more than 10 rounds of AK, the author is, well, sheer nonsense. In reality, AK carries a simple nigga with two rounds of ammunition, and here ... In short, if you wanted to add complexity, then this is not so. Sorry if you made a mistake.
7. Predictability. Example: mission Massacre in the area, the last in the I part. By the name and the first two seconds of the cutscene, I determined that this mission will be about how ballasts UNEXPECTIVELY burst on the party of Grove. MDE.
8. The color of the name of the mission - if you think it's cool - no. This attracts only shkolota. And choosing a mission is very difficult.
These are the minuses for the completed 1.5 parts, maybe I’ll dig up something else.
Of course, I will not list the pluses - they have already been listed for me. The author lacks screenwriting. Read fan fiction about the ghetto on the ficbook, watch movies about the ghetto, maybe you will find out something useful for yourself.
Mat. Warning issued, comment edited.
Kiriller12 06/24/2018, 11:51:37 p.m.
Quote: nemnogo star
this is the perfect project
I do not agree with what is written. The project, although it was done with high quality, is still not close to 10/10 DYOMOTY, 12/10.
The project is made on a solid eight. Of the minuses (serious minuses, and not those that the author wrote), I can single out the following:
1. Dialogs are too sophisticated. I don’t see it at the first diomer, but if in other projects it could somehow be justified - like serious people, they have work, all that, then the ghetto, even the name says that. And what do we hear from simple untrained guys who most likely didn’t even go to college, guys? "The reason for this could be." The author, if you want to tighten up your lvl of writing Geth dialogs - go GTA GTA in English, without crack. You will see that in almost every sentence they have Man, homie, shit, and other Gett slang. 2. Niggas reading Eminem. Mmm ... Dude, if you wanted to find a suitable soundtrack, you would have taken songs from LS Radio or from Playback FM (of course, this is the East Coast, and in LS it is so-so, but it's not Eminem and is close)
3. Repeating songs. It was necessary to work on such a thing, the same mission with the leader Aztekas, when he met with GG. The whole mission is played by Snoop Dogg and Dre, here the song ends and .. again? Rilly? It was necessary to at least combine two songs into one audio file and then already pour into the diome, otherwise this is complete nonsense.
4. The skin of the Nill. Well this is a shame. It was necessary to take the original from the SA, otherwise the whole atmosphere disappears. And yes, you have two Ls in the RAR archive, and one in the name of the mission.
5. Aztecas - Mexicans. And they say Pindos. If you wanted to write 'pendejo', then these are two different things. Pendejo - Herogol.
6. Ballasts withstand more than 10 rounds of AK, the author is, well, sheer nonsense. In reality, AK carries a simple nigga with two rounds of ammunition, and here ... In short, if you wanted to add complexity, then this is not so. Sorry if you made a mistake.
7. Predictability. Example: mission Massacre in the area, the last in the I part. By the name and the first two seconds of the cutscene, I determined that this mission will be about how ballasts UNEXPECTIVELY burst on the party of Grove. MDE.
8. The color of the name of the mission - if you think it's cool - no. This attracts only shkolota. And choosing a mission is very difficult.
These are the minuses for the completed 1.5 parts, maybe I’ll dig up something else.
Of course, I will not list the pluses - they have already been listed for me. The author lacks screenwriting. Read fan fiction about the ghetto on the ficbook, watch movies about the ghetto, maybe you will find out something useful for yourself.
Mat. Warning issued, comment edited.
Kiriller12 06/24/2018, 11:51:37 p.m.
Quote: nemnogo star
this is the perfect project
I do not agree with what is written. The project, although it was done with high quality, is still not close to 10/10 DYOMOTY, 12/10.
The project is made on a solid eight. Of the minuses (serious minuses, and not those that the author wrote), I can single out the following:
1. Dialogs are too sophisticated. I don’t see it at the first diomer, but if in other projects it could somehow be justified - like serious people, they have work, all that, then the ghetto, even the name says that. And what do we hear from simple untrained guys who most likely didn’t even go to college, guys? "The reason for this could be." The author, if you want to tighten up your lvl of writing Geth dialogs - go GTA GTA in English, without crack. You will see that in almost every sentence they have Man, homie, shit, and other Gett slang. 2. Niggas reading Eminem. Mmm ... Dude, if you wanted to find a suitable soundtrack, you would have taken songs from LS Radio or from Playback FM (of course, this is the East Coast, and in LS it is so-so, but it's not Eminem and is close)
3. Repeating songs. It was necessary to work on such a thing, the same mission with the leader Aztekas, when he met with GG. The whole mission is played by Snoop Dogg and Dre, here the song ends and .. again? Rilly? It was necessary to at least combine two songs into one audio file and then already pour into the diome, otherwise this is complete nonsense.
4. The skin of the Nill. Well this is a shame. It was necessary to take the original from the SA, otherwise the whole atmosphere disappears. And yes, you have two Ls in the RAR archive, and one in the name of the mission.
5. Aztecas - Mexicans. And they say Pindos. If you wanted to write 'pendejo', then these are two different things. Pendejo - Herogol.
6. Ballasts withstand more than 10 rounds of AK, the author is, well, sheer nonsense. In reality, AK carries a simple nigga with two rounds of ammunition, and here ... In short, if you wanted to add complexity, then this is not so. Sorry if you made a mistake.
7. Predictability. Example: mission Massacre in the area, the last in the I part. By the name and the first two seconds of the cutscene, I determined that this mission will be about how ballasts UNEXPECTIVELY burst on the party of Grove. MDE.
8. The color of the name of the mission - if you think it's cool - no. This attracts only shkolota. And choosing a mission is very difficult.
These are the minuses for the completed 1.5 parts, maybe I’ll dig up something else.
Of course, I will not list the pluses - they have already been listed for me. The author lacks screenwriting. Read fan fiction about the ghetto on the ficbook, watch movies about the ghetto, maybe you will find out something useful for yourself.
Mat. Warning issued, comment edited.
Kiriller12 06/24/2018, 11:51:37 p.m.
Quote: nemnogo star
this is the perfect project
I do not agree with what is written. The project, although it was done with high quality, is still not close to 10/10 DYOMOTY, 12/10.
The project is made on a solid eight. Of the minuses (serious minuses, and not those that the author wrote), I can single out the following:
1. Dialogs are too sophisticated. I don’t see it at the first diomer, but if in other projects it could somehow be justified - like serious people, they have work, all that, then the ghetto, even the name says that. And what do we hear from simple untrained guys who most likely didn’t even go to college, guys? "The reason for this could be." The author, if you want to tighten up your lvl of writing Geth dialogs - go GTA GTA in English, without crack. You will see that in almost every sentence they have Man, homie, shit, and other Gett slang. 2. Niggas reading Eminem. Mmm ... Dude, if you wanted to find a suitable soundtrack, you would have taken songs from LS Radio or from Playback FM (of course, this is the East Coast, and in LS it is so-so, but it's not Eminem and is close)
3. Repeating songs. It was necessary to work on such a thing, the same mission with the leader Aztekas, when he met with GG. The whole mission is played by Snoop Dogg and Dre, here the song ends and .. again? Rilly? It was necessary to at least combine two songs into one audio file and then already pour into the diome, otherwise this is complete nonsense.
4. The skin of the Nill. Well this is a shame. It was necessary to take the original from the SA, otherwise the whole atmosphere disappears. And yes, you have two Ls in the RAR archive, and one in the name of the mission.
5. Aztecas - Mexicans. And they say Pindos. If you wanted to write 'pendejo', then these are two different things. Pendejo - Herogol.
6. Ballasts withstand more than 10 rounds of AK, the author is, well, sheer nonsense. In reality, AK carries a simple nigga with two rounds of ammunition, and here ... In short, if you wanted to add complexity, then this is not so. Sorry if you made a mistake.
7. Predictability. Example: mission Massacre in the area, the last in the I part. By the name and the first two seconds of the cutscene, I determined that this mission will be about how ballasts UNEXPECTIVELY burst on the party of Grove. MDE.
8. The color of the name of the mission - if you think it's cool - no. This attracts only shkolota. And choosing a mission is very difficult.
These are the minuses for the completed 1.5 parts, maybe I’ll dig up something else.
Of course, I will not list the pluses - they have already been listed for me. The author lacks screenwriting. Read fan fiction about the ghetto on the ficbook, watch movies about the ghetto, maybe you will find out something useful for yourself.
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Kiriller12 06/24/2018, 11:51:37 p.m.
Already minus for not making spaces after punctuation
Download and evaluate a little later.
Download and evaluate a little later.
Oh, here it is already cool, but not HD vyyory. Somehow set yourself up, Rhino is ugly.
Glory to the hero!